Doris, I think you chose a great subject to capture. The natural leading lines of the stairs make it very obvious to the eye as to where I should be looking. My critique would be that your third photo just looks too busy in my opinion. There are lines leading my eyes everywhere. That may have been your entire intention, I just found it a little confusing. Great job on your project!
Doris, I love the way that you took these pictures! I could definitely tell that you took advantage of the leading lines in this project. The only thing that I could find to critique was the lighting was slightly darker in the last photo and wasn't as bright as the first two. Other than that, I think you did awesome!
Doris, the camera angles on the last two in you're collection are really nice and really achieves a good feel for the subject. I enjoy the lighting in the second pick the most as well. I feel like the overall collection would feel more cohesive if the lighting was similar to that one in all of the pictures. The rest seems kind of cool rather than warm. Also in the first picture the brown piece of the staircase hindered the composition for me. I think maybe a different angle for that picture would also benefit the overall work. Wonderful work!
I really enjoy your shots including both the cropped in and broad views of the subject! I would agree with some others' comments and say what I would change would be the warmth/exposure between the first two shots and the third to make them compliment each other better!
Doris, I think you chose a great subject to capture. The natural leading lines of the stairs make it very obvious to the eye as to where I should be looking. My critique would be that your third photo just looks too busy in my opinion. There are lines leading my eyes everywhere. That may have been your entire intention, I just found it a little confusing. Great job on your project!
ReplyDeleteDoris, I love the way that you took these pictures! I could definitely tell that you took advantage of the leading lines in this project. The only thing that I could find to critique was the lighting was slightly darker in the last photo and wasn't as bright as the first two. Other than that, I think you did awesome!
ReplyDeleteDoris, the camera angles on the last two in you're collection are really nice and really achieves a good feel for the subject. I enjoy the lighting in the second pick the most as well. I feel like the overall collection would feel more cohesive if the lighting was similar to that one in all of the pictures. The rest seems kind of cool rather than warm. Also in the first picture the brown piece of the staircase hindered the composition for me. I think maybe a different angle for that picture would also benefit the overall work. Wonderful work!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy your shots including both the cropped in and broad views of the subject! I would agree with some others' comments and say what I would change would be the warmth/exposure between the first two shots and the third to make them compliment each other better!
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