Thursday, March 25, 2021

payton hudson project 4, group 4

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tilt shift 

5 comments:

  1. Hi Payton
    Like: good composition - always like the mini cooper
    Help: perhaps more saturation and a little more blur

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  2. Hey Payton,
    I like that there is an even number of cars and one car on the opposite side creating a pattern.
    I think that more blurring may be useful at top and bottom.
    -Kirsten Leynes

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  3. Hey Payton,
    I think the composition could be perfect- that Mini Coop could really make it look tiny! I think it needs a bit more saturation and blur and maybe taken from a higher angle.

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  4. Hey!
    I really like the initial choices of colors, lots of high saturation colors to begin with.
    However, I think this choice + the distance away from the subjects seems to have made the picture lose the desired intent.
    Getting closer to the subject + making the initial image a little less saturated may help!

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  5. Payton, really good use of height to create the miniature effect. I would make it even more blurry so you achieve that tilt-shift.

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