Shannie, I love your first image probably the most out of them all! The tops of the fence act sort of as leading lines that point your eye towards the top of the building. If I had to change anything, it would be the last photo, the vines on the brick confuse my eyes as to what I am suppose to be focusing on. Other than that, great job!
Shannie, I love how you made a worn down building look like a piece of art. This is true talent. Making the photos grayscale gives them a sense of mystery. The leading lines in your first two photos are well placed. However, I'm not really sure that the last picture fits in with the other two photos. They are pictures of the whole building.
Shannie, Image 1 and Image 3 are both really strong. Even though i know its a building, it comes off as its own art piece alone. The first piece is the strongest. It has great composition and the camera angles are great. The ambience lighting at the top of the building is also really great and adds to the overall piece. I think the picture in the middle stands out a bit too much compared to the other two. In image 1 and 3 the leading lines seem stronger to me and the overall lighting of the picture is different.
Shannie I enjoy these pictures a lot! The depth of field and leading lines of the first two are great! My comment to improve this collection would be potentially to shoot something with more visual depth like the first two or maybe change the place of the second and third picture to change up the visual arrangement.
Shannie, I love your first image probably the most out of them all! The tops of the fence act sort of as leading lines that point your eye towards the top of the building. If I had to change anything, it would be the last photo, the vines on the brick confuse my eyes as to what I am suppose to be focusing on. Other than that, great job!
ReplyDeleteShannie, I love how you made a worn down building look like a piece of art. This is true talent. Making the photos grayscale gives them a sense of mystery. The leading lines in your first two photos are well placed. However, I'm not really sure that the last picture fits in with the other two photos. They are pictures of the whole building.
ReplyDeleteShannie, Image 1 and Image 3 are both really strong. Even though i know its a building, it comes off as its own art piece alone. The first piece is the strongest. It has great composition and the camera angles are great. The ambience lighting at the top of the building is also really great and adds to the overall piece. I think the picture in the middle stands out a bit too much compared to the other two. In image 1 and 3 the leading lines seem stronger to me and the overall lighting of the picture is different.
ReplyDeleteShannie I enjoy these pictures a lot! The depth of field and leading lines of the first two are great! My comment to improve this collection would be potentially to shoot something with more visual depth like the first two or maybe change the place of the second and third picture to change up the visual arrangement.
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